IELTS 9 āĶļā§ā͕⧋āͰ āĶŠāĶūāĶ“ā§ŸāĶūāͰ ā͉āĶŠāĶū⧟: Essay āĶ“ Paragraph āĶē⧇āĶ–āĶūāͰ āͧāĶūāĶŠāĶļāĶŪā§‚āĶđ

* Step-by-Step Process to Write a Perfect Essay or Paragraph for IELTS Band 9

 

* Step 1: Understand the Question Properly

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻā͟āĶŋ āĶ­āĶūāĶēā§‹āĶ­āĶūāĶŽā§‡ āĶŠā§œā§āĶĻ āĶāĶŽāĶ‚ ā͕⧀ ā͚āĶūāĶ“ā§ŸāĶū āĶđā§Ÿā§‡ā͛⧇ āĶĪāĶū āĶŽā§‹āĶāĶūāͰ āĶšā§‡āĶ·ā§ā͟āĶū āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻāĨĪ ā͆āĶŠāĶĻāĶŋ āĶ•āĶŋ āĶŪāĶĪāĶūāĶŪāĶĪ āĶĶāĶŋāĶĪ⧇ āĶŽāĶē⧇ā͛⧇, ā͕⧋āĶĻ āĶļāĶŪāĶļā§āĶŊāĶūāͰ āĶļāĶŪāĶūāͧāĶūāĶĻ āĶĶāĶŋāĶĪ⧇ āĶŽāĶē⧇ā͛⧇, āĶĻāĶūāĶ•āĶŋ āĶĶ⧁ā͇ā͟āĶŋ āĶŪāĶĪ⧇āͰ āĶĪ⧁āĶēāĶĻāĶū āĶ•āͰāĶĪ⧇ āĶŽāĶē⧇ā͛⧇?

English: Read the question carefully and understand what it is asking. Is it asking for your opinion, a problem and solution, or comparing two views?

 Step 2: Brainstorm Ideas (1-2 Minutes)

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻ⧇āͰ ā͟āĶŠāĶŋāĶ• āĶĻāĶŋā§Ÿā§‡ āĶĶā§āͰ⧁āĶĪ āĶ•āĶŋā͛⧁ āĶŪā§‚āĶē āĶŠā§Ÿā§‡āĶĻā§ā͟ ā͚āĶŋāĶĻā§āĶĪāĶū āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻāĨĪ āĶļāĶūāͧāĶūāͰāĶĢāĶĪ 2ā͟āĶŋ main idea āĶŊāĶĨ⧇āĶ·ā§ā͟āĨĪ āĶŠā§āͰāĶĪāĶŋā͟āĶŋ ā͆ā͇āĶĄāĶŋ⧟āĶūāͰ ā͜āĶĻā§āĶŊ 1-2ā͟āĶŋ example ā͚āĶŋāĶĻā§āĶĪāĶū āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻāĨĪ

English: Quickly brainstorm 2 strong main ideas. For each idea, think of 1–2 supporting examples or reasons.

* Step 3: Make a Structure (Planning is Key!)

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: ā͆āĶŠāĶĻāĶūāͰ Essay āĶŽāĶū Paragraph ā͕⧀āĶ­āĶūāĶŽā§‡ āĶļāĶūā͜āĶūāĶŽā§‡āĶĻ āĶĪāĶū āĶ āĶŋāĶ• āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻāĨĪ āĶŊ⧇āĶŪāĶĻ:

  • Introduction (āĶ­ā§‚āĶŪāĶŋāĶ•āĶū)
  • Body Paragraph 1 (āĶŠā§āͰāĶĨāĶŪ ā͆ā͇āĶĄāĶŋ⧟āĶū + ā͉āĶĶāĶūāĶđāͰāĶĢ)
  • Body Paragraph 2 (āĶĶā§āĶŽāĶŋāĶĪā§€ā§Ÿ ā͆ā͇āĶĄāĶŋ⧟āĶū + ā͉āĶĶāĶūāĶđāͰāĶĢ)
  • Conclusion (ā͉āĶŠāĶļāĶ‚āĶđāĶūāͰ)

English: Decide on a clear structure:

  • Introduction
  • Body Paragraph 1 (Main idea + Example)
  • Body Paragraph 2 (Main idea + Example)
  • Conclusion

* Step 4: Write the Introduction Clearly

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: āĶ­ā§‚āĶŪāĶŋāĶ•āĶū āĶ…āĶ‚āĶķ⧇ āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻā͟āĶŋ āĶŠā§āĶŊāĶūāͰāĶūāĶŦā§āͰ⧇ā͜ āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻ āĶāĶŽāĶ‚ ā͆āĶŠāĶĻāĶūāͰ āĶŪā§‚āĶē āĶĶ⧃āĶ·ā§ā͟āĶŋāĶ­āĶ™ā§āĶ—āĶŋ āĶŽāĶū āĶĨāĶŋāĶļāĶŋāĶļ āĶļā§āĶŸā§‡ā͟āĶŪ⧇āĶĻā§ā͟ āĶĶāĶŋāĶĻāĨĪ

English: In the introduction, paraphrase the topic and give your thesis statement or opinion clearly.

* Example:
Topic: "Some people think money is the most important factor for success."
Intro: "While some believe that money plays a crucial role in achieving success, I believe that hard work and determination are even more important."

* Step 5: Write Body Paragraphs Logically

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: āĶŠā§āͰāĶĪāĶŋā͟āĶŋ āĶ…āĶĻ⧁āĶšā§ā͛⧇āĶĶ⧇ āĶāĶ•ā͟āĶŋ āĶŪā§‚āĶē āĶŠā§Ÿā§‡āĶĻā§ā͟ āĶĶāĶŋāĶĻ āĶāĶŽāĶ‚ āĶĪāĶūāͰ āĶļāĶūāĶĨ⧇ āĶŽā§āĶŊāĶūāĶ–ā§āĶŊāĶū āĶ“ ā͉āĶĶāĶūāĶđāͰāĶĢ āĶĶāĶŋāĶĻāĨĪ

  • Topic Sentence
  • Explanation
  • Example
  • Result or mini-conclusion (if possible)

English: Start each paragraph with a topic sentence, then explain the idea, give an example, and end with a small conclusion or effect.

* Example Body Point:

Hard work often leads to consistent improvement. For instance, many successful athletes or businessmen did not become rich overnight. Instead, years of dedication helped them grow steadily, even without huge financial support initially.

 Step 6: Write a Strong Conclusion

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: ā͉āĶŠāĶļāĶ‚āĶđāĶūāͰ⧇ ā͆āĶŠāĶĻāĶūāͰ āĶŪāĶĪāĶūāĶŪāĶĪ āĶŽāĶū āĶļāĶūāͰāĶūāĶ‚āĶķ ā͆āĶŽāĶūāͰ āĶēāĶŋā͖⧁āĶĻāĨĪ āĶĻāĶĪ⧁āĶĻ ā͕⧋āĶĻā§‹ āĶĪāĶĨā§āĶŊ āĶĶāĶŋāĶŽā§‡āĶĻ āĶĻāĶūāĨĪ

English: Restate your main opinion and summarize your two main points. Do not add new ideas.

* Example Conclusion:

In conclusion, although money can help in many ways, real success depends more on effort and determination. Therefore, I strongly believe that hard work is more essential than wealth.

 Step 7: Proofread and Edit (2 āĶŪāĶŋāĶĻāĶŋā͟)

āĶŽāĶūāĶ‚āĶēāĶū: āĶē⧇āĶ–āĶūā͟āĶŋ āĶķ⧇āĶ· āĶđāĶē⧇ āĶŽāĶūāĶĻāĶūāĶĻ, āĶ—āĶ āĶĻ āĶāĶŽāĶ‚ āĶķāĶŽā§āĶĶ⧇āͰ āĶŽā§āĶŊāĶŽāĶđāĶūāͰ āĶšā§‡āĶ• āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻāĨĪ āĶŊ⧇ā͕⧋āĶĻā§‹ āͭ⧁āĶē āĶĨāĶūāĶ•āĶē⧇ āĶ āĶŋāĶ• āĶ•āͰ⧁āĶĻāĨĪ

English: After writing, check for spelling, grammar, and sentence structure errors. Make sure your ideas are clear and your vocabulary is formal.

* Tips for IELTS Band 9:

1. Use a variety of sentence structures
2. Avoid informal language (e.g., “kids” → “children”)
3. Use linking words (however, therefore, in addition, for example, on the other hand, etc.)
4. Keep your essay between 250–290 words
5. Practice with past IELTS topics

* Bonus: Common IELTS Essay Types

  1. Opinion Essay (Do you agree or disagree?)
  2. Discussion Essay (Discuss both views and give your opinion)
  3. Problem & Solution Essay
  4. Advantages and Disadvantages Essay
  5. Double Question Essay (Two questions in one prompt)

 


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