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Step-by-Step Process to Write a Perfect Essay or Paragraph for IELTS Band 9
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Step 1: Understand the Question Properly
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻāĶāĶŋ āĶāĶūāĶēā§āĶāĶūāĶŽā§ āĶŠā§ā§āĶĻ
āĶāĶŽāĶ
āĶā§
āĶāĶūāĶā§āĶū
āĶđā§ā§āĶā§
āĶĪāĶū
āĶŽā§āĶāĶūāͰ
āĶā§āĶ·ā§āĶāĶū
āĶāͰā§āĶĻāĨĪ
āĶāĶŠāĶĻāĶŋ
āĶāĶŋ
āĶŪāĶĪāĶūāĶŪāĶĪ
āĶĶāĶŋāĶĪā§
āĶŽāĶēā§āĶā§,
āĶā§āĶĻ
āĶļāĶŪāĶļā§āĶŊāĶūāͰ āĶļāĶŪāĶūāͧāĶūāĶĻ
āĶĶāĶŋāĶĪā§
āĶŽāĶēā§āĶā§,
āĶĻāĶūāĶāĶŋ
āĶĶā§āĶāĶāĶŋ
āĶŪāĶĪā§āͰ
āĶĪā§āĶēāĶĻāĶū
āĶāͰāĶĪā§
āĶŽāĶēā§āĶā§?
English: Read the question carefully and understand what it is
asking. Is it asking for your opinion, a problem and solution, or comparing two
views?
Step 2: Brainstorm Ideas (1-2 Minutes)
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻā§āͰ āĶāĶŠāĶŋāĶ
āĶĻāĶŋā§ā§
āĶĶā§āͰā§āĶĪ
āĶāĶŋāĶā§
āĶŪā§āĶē
āĶŠā§ā§āĶĻā§āĶ
āĶāĶŋāĶĻā§āĶĪāĶū
āĶāͰā§āĶĻāĨĪ
āĶļāĶūāͧāĶūāͰāĶĢāĶĪ 2āĶāĶŋ
main idea āĶŊāĶĨā§āĶ·ā§āĶāĨĪ āĶŠā§āͰāĶĪāĶŋāĶāĶŋ āĶāĶāĶĄāĶŋā§āĶūāͰ āĶāĶĻā§āĶŊ
1-2āĶāĶŋ
example āĶāĶŋāĶĻā§āĶĪāĶū
āĶāͰā§āĶĻāĨĪ
English: Quickly brainstorm 2 strong main ideas. For each idea,
think of 1â2 supporting examples or reasons.
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Step 3: Make a Structure (Planning is Key!)
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶāĶŠāĶĻāĶūāͰ Essay āĶŽāĶū Paragraph āĶā§āĶāĶūāĶŽā§ āĶļāĶūāĶāĶūāĶŽā§āĶĻ āĶĪāĶū
āĶ āĶŋāĶ
āĶāͰā§āĶĻāĨĪ
āĶŊā§āĶŪāĶĻ:
English: Decide on a clear structure:
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Step 4: Write the Introduction Clearly
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶā§āĶŪāĶŋāĶāĶū āĶ
āĶāĶķā§
āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻāĶāĶŋ āĶŠā§āĶŊāĶūāͰāĶūāĶŦā§āͰā§āĶ āĶāͰā§āĶĻ
āĶāĶŽāĶ
āĶāĶŠāĶĻāĶūāͰ
āĶŪā§āĶē
āĶĶā§āĶ·ā§āĶāĶŋāĶāĶā§āĶāĶŋ āĶŽāĶū
āĶĨāĶŋāĶļāĶŋāĶļ
āĶļā§āĶā§āĶāĶŪā§āĶĻā§āĶ āĶĶāĶŋāĶĻāĨĪ
English: In the introduction, paraphrase the topic and give your
thesis statement or opinion clearly.
* Example:
Topic: "Some people think money is the most important factor for
success."
Intro: "While some believe that money plays a crucial role in
achieving success, I believe that hard work and determination are even more
important."
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Step 5: Write Body Paragraphs Logically
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶŠā§āͰāĶĪāĶŋāĶāĶŋ āĶ
āĶĻā§āĶā§āĶā§āĶĶā§ āĶāĶāĶāĶŋ
āĶŪā§āĶē
āĶŠā§ā§āĶĻā§āĶ
āĶĶāĶŋāĶĻ
āĶāĶŽāĶ
āĶĪāĶūāͰ
āĶļāĶūāĶĨā§
āĶŽā§āĶŊāĶūāĶā§āĶŊāĶū āĶ
āĶāĶĶāĶūāĶđāͰāĶĢ
āĶĶāĶŋāĶĻāĨĪ
English: Start each paragraph with a topic sentence, then
explain the idea, give an example, and end with a small conclusion or effect.
* Example Body Point:
Hard work often leads to consistent
improvement. For instance, many successful athletes or businessmen did not
become rich overnight. Instead, years of dedication helped them grow steadily,
even without huge financial support initially.
Step 6: Write a Strong Conclusion
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶāĶŠāĶļāĶāĶđāĶūāͰ⧠āĶāĶŠāĶĻāĶūāͰ
āĶŪāĶĪāĶūāĶŪāĶĪ
āĶŽāĶū
āĶļāĶūāͰāĶūāĶāĶķ
āĶāĶŽāĶūāͰ
āĶēāĶŋāĶā§āĶĻāĨĪ
āĶĻāĶĪā§āĶĻ
āĶā§āĶĻā§
āĶĪāĶĨā§āĶŊ
āĶĶāĶŋāĶŽā§āĶĻ
āĶĻāĶūāĨĪ
English: Restate your main opinion and summarize your two main
points. Do not add new ideas.
* Example Conclusion:
In conclusion, although money can
help in many ways, real success depends more on effort and determination.
Therefore, I strongly believe that hard work is more essential than wealth.
Step 7: Proofread and Edit (2 āĶŪāĶŋāĶĻāĶŋāĶ)
āĶŽāĶūāĶāĶēāĶū: āĶēā§āĶāĶūāĶāĶŋ āĶķā§āĶ·
āĶđāĶēā§
āĶŽāĶūāĶĻāĶūāĶĻ,
āĶāĶ āĶĻ
āĶāĶŽāĶ
āĶķāĶŽā§āĶĶā§āͰ
āĶŽā§āĶŊāĶŽāĶđāĶūāͰ āĶā§āĶ
āĶāͰā§āĶĻāĨĪ
āĶŊā§āĶā§āĶĻā§
āĶā§āĶē
āĶĨāĶūāĶāĶēā§
āĶ āĶŋāĶ
āĶāͰā§āĶĻāĨĪ
English: After writing, check for spelling, grammar, and sentence
structure errors. Make sure your ideas are clear and your vocabulary is formal.
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Tips for IELTS Band 9:
1. Use a variety of sentence structures
2. Avoid informal language (e.g., âkidsâ â âchildrenâ)
3. Use linking words (however, therefore, in addition, for
example, on the other hand, etc.)
4. Keep your essay between 250â290 words
5. Practice with past IELTS topics
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Bonus: Common IELTS Essay Types
āĶāĶļāĶļāĶūāĶēāĶūāĶŪā§ āĶāĶēāĶūāĶāĶā§āĶŪ! āĶāĶŪāĶŋ āĶđā§āĶļā§āĶĻ āĶāĶāĶūāĶĄā§āĶŪāĶŋ āĶāĶāĶ āĶ ā§āĶŊāĶūāĶļāĶŋāĶļā§āĶā§āĶŊāĶūāĶĻā§āĶāĨĪ
āĶāĶŪāĶūāĶĶā§āͰ āĶā§āͰā§āĶļ, āĶāĶŽā§āĶ, āĶā§ā§āĶŽāĶļāĶūāĶāĶ āĶ āĶ ā§āĶŊāĶūāĶŠ āĶĄā§āĶā§āĶēāĶŠāĶŪā§āĶĻā§āĶ āĶļāĶŦāĶāĶā§ā§āĶŊāĶūāͰ āĶļāĶūāͰā§āĶāĶŋāĶļ āĶļāĶŪā§āĶŠāͰā§āĶā§ āĶā§āĶĻā§ āĶŠā§āͰāĶķā§āĶĻ āĶĨāĶūāĶāĶēā§ āĶāĶūāĶĻāĶūāĶĻāĨĪ āĶāĶŪāĶŋ āĶāĶŠāĶĻāĶūāĶā§ āĶļāĶūāĶđāĶūāĶŊā§āĶŊ āĶāͰāĶĪā§ āĶŠā§āͰāĶļā§āĶĪā§āĶĪ!
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